Title:Kryptonite
Author:Summer Clemmons
Genre:Fantasy
Pages:4-5
Mentor Texts:The movie Super Man
Audience:Class room
Writing Process:I talked to My mom about the story thing, and then went down stairs and my family was watching Super Man, so I decided to do a twist on that story
Publishing Process:With Mo, Olivia, Jazminee, And Kadija, were doing an Anthologist
Tuesday, January 8, 2008
Reflection thing
Posted by Cowboy Up_HTMMA at 8:59 PM
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This reflection reads like notes for a reflection. Instead of calling it "Reflection thing", I suggest making the title just "Reflection" (it shows you're taking it a little more seriously). I was impressed by the anthology that you and your group put together! I would like to see you polish up your reflection a little more. You wrote such an impressive short story with so much emotion and development of your characters! I remember during the Exhibition, Mr. Elizondo specifically mentioned how great he thought your story was. It stood out as a well-told and well-developed story! I love the way you explain how you got the inspiration for your story from a specific night at home. How are you going to get this story out to a larger audience?
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